PotatoSkin's Spriting Gallery: Noob Style

[PotatoSkin]

Hey, Otland.

I started spriting yesterday, so today I figured I would upload these sprites and let you guys tell me whats good, whats bad..and what needs improvement.



This is not my outline, just my coloring and shading:






Please note that all sprites are MINE and I reserve the rights to not let you "use" them.

 

[Sir Bananas]

Well the last one is preety nice, the others are kinda not shaped well and require better shading, but since your beggining, it looks good for a begginer ^^
As you continue to sprite, you'll eventually get better and better

 

[PotatoSkin]

Yeah i have absolutely no idea how to shade, or even make the shape look "natural"

 

[Sir Bananas]

Look for some tutorials on shading, but on the matter of shapes, i suck at them too XD Try to find some templates online

 

[Amiroslo]

Add water mark to them

 

[Savly]

I think the last 2 look good, only the sword is not compleetly symmetical in shape.

 

[Reasembled]

the legs look kinda akward, center them and change the shape up a bit so its a bit more linear (not completely ofc)