1. The nature looks OK, except for the grass tufts on the bushes.
WILL FIX
2. I think you could some details. It looks a bit boring.
NOPE ITS RPG NOT SHOWOFF
3. No stones in a cave? And I don't like straight paths in a cave.
NO THATS MAN MADE PART! THE REST OF CAVE IS IN PREV POSTS IF YOU CARE TO LOOK
4. It's to squary I guess.
WHATS SQUARY? AND ITS ALL RAW...
5. I honestly think it looks boring. Try to add like a damaged wall or something. Perhaps some details on the walls aswell?
ITS ROOK AND LIKE I SAID IN PREV POST NOT 100% FINSISHED! WHY DOESN'T ANYONE READ :/
6. Don't like those pink trees. I would like to see atleast some detailing on the road.
I DO SO THEY STAYING AND AS ABOVE FOR ROAD
7. The statues doesn't fit tere I tink.
THEY STAYING
8. What's that? Looks boring.
PART OF THE MAP.. SHOWS THE SHAPE
9. The nature is looking good.
THANKS
10. That's one lame 'light' house.
THATS BEEN LIKE THAT SINCE START, I HAVEN'T EDITED THAT YET, I HAVEN'T POSTED AT ALL SO THOUGHT I'D SHOW IT, WILL CHANGE THAT NOW THANKS
11. Like the idea! But I don't like the beach, it's to straight.
IT WAS ONE OF FIRST MAPPINGS, BUT JUST EDITED SLIGHTLY, I WILL EDIT SHAPE
12. That is?
THE MAP..
13. What's up with so many trees?
BECAUSE I WANT IT THAT WAY
14. If that's a 'schoolyard', it could be done better. But I like the way you map.
NEVER SAID SCHOOL YARD.. THINK OF A COLLEGE CAMPUS
15. It looks empty...
MEANT TO
16. Not much to say really, I mean... Something is missing and I can't see why you put a 'storage room' there.
BECAUSE MOST SCHOOLS/COLLEGES HAVE A STORAGE ROOM PLUS THERE IS SECRET ITEMS IN CRATES
17. Don't use those tiles. They're ugly.
I LIKE THEM
18. I hate thoose trees. *sadface*
I DONT
19. That looks weird.
..NO
20. I liked everything except for the carpet.
IDK WHY I DID THAT LOL
21. Harry Potter inspiration?
NOPE BUT ANY MAGIC BASED ACADEMY WOULD SEEM SO
22. Can't figure out what that is. It looks horrible.
..
23. I don't like that picutre at all...
KK
24. Boring.
.. RPG NOT SHOWOFF
25. Try to add more details. A ship isn't that clean.
WTF YES IT IS.. WTF IS WRONG WITH MY SHIP? PEOPLE CLEAN SHIPS YOU KNOW!
I THINK YOU CAN LEARN TO LOOK AT THINGS IN ANOTHER PERSPECTIVE!
AND WHAT DETAILS DO YOU RECOMMEND ON THE CLOCK TOWER... CONSIDERING THATS WHAT IT IS AND NOTHING ELSE AND YOU WONT SEE IT MAJORITY OF
TIME AS ITS ON THE ROOF!!!!! (EXCUSE THE PUN)
1- IM A NEW MAPPER, NEW TO MAPPING AND NEW TO OTLAND
2- YOU HAVE 2 POSTS.. ONE ON MY THREAD, AND ONE ON ANOTHER MAPPING THREAD
3- IF YOU GONNA POST CRITICISM IT BETTER BE CONTRUCTIVE OR GTFO
4- DON'T JUST LIST WITHOUT QUOTING TO NEXT PAGE BECAUSE I HAD TO RECHECK...
5- YOU SEEM TO SAY ALL MY THINGS ARE BORING AND LACK DETAIL, YET THERE IS A MAJOR DIFFERENCE BETWEEN SHOW OFF AND RPG. RPG MEANS THAT PLAYERS WILL SPAM TRASH ALL OVER THE PLACE ANYWAY AND ITS MADE SO THERE IS MORE THAN ENOUGH ROOM TO WALK ETC.
ALSO FOR YOUR INFO. THE MAP LOOKS EMPTY BECAUSE ONCE MITCH4LL MAKES THE NPC'S THERE WILL BE A TOTAL OF 27 NPCS ON THAT MAP ALONE/ SOME BEING STUDENTS SOME BEING TEACHERS ETC. HE SPECIFICALLY TOLD ME NOT TO OVERSPAM TO MUCH DETAIL AS HE INTENDS TO DO THIS. I HAVE NOTED SOME OF YOUR "CRITICISM" AND HAVE FIXED/CHANGED SOME BITS AROUND BUT THE REST IS FINE AND AS FOR THE DESIGN. YOU WON'T GET BORED BECAUSE YOU ARE THERE FOR 8 LEVELS ONLY. YOU CAN'T "ROOK STAY" EITHER AS YOU CAN'T GAIN EXP AFTER LEVEL 8. THEREFORE MUST GET THE BOAT TO MAINLAND OR STAY IN ROOK DOING NOTHING.[/B]