[Newbie in need of tips] Tempel

[Zatyrax]

I know it´s not something to showoff, but the thing is that i need tips on how to make it better so i can become better So, spam me with tips eace:

UPDATE:

 

[Ellinorze]

Thats Evo map temple, you ahve just edit it, but it was nice with that waterfall, but the 3 third plane to much water falls :/, better with mountain with you gonna do a water fall, thats my opinon

 

[Zatyrax]

Thats Evo map temple, you ahve just edit it, but it was nice with that waterfall, but the 3 third plane to much water falls :/, better with mountain with you gonna do a water fall, thats my opinon

Tanks for comment I was thinking that i should write its a edited evo tempel, but forgot about it I'll post a small update tommorow with less waterfalls at 3rd plane.

 

[Carlos9]

I dont like that roof, it just doesnt go with that wall.

 

[BardockTornado]

The waterfalls make no sense. I agree with Carlos9, the roof doesn't look good. Take some tutorials. :thumbup:

 

[Zatyrax]

Thanks Made some small fixes, take a look at the first post

 

[Carlos9]

Where does the water come from? from a wall??

 

[BardockTornado]

It still looks sense-less.

 

[Zatyrax]

Damn it Just to start from scratch then?

Well, i´ll post an update sooner or later with a new temple. Have some scripting to do