Sir Shutter's latest mapping works!

[Sir Shutter]

Thread Rules :-
*No flamming

Hiho, I've started to map abit, I'd like to show you all my work here, I just started to do a giant spider cave, I accept criticism but no flamming please like "you suck.." and such, I just want to know what I am mapping wrong, or doing wrong stuff that shouldn't be in such maps, so let's start showing my work :-

GS Cave!

I'll keep this thread updated with my latest works and Improvments depending on the comments, thanks!

 

[Peroxide]

I like it, but it could be a little more shaped
and more detailed :/
anyway i repped u

 

[Sir Shutter]

Thanks, there is a little idea I added, those humans, behind them there are boney wall's looks great, but not very viewed, I think yea, it need's more detail's il update it, I'll keep thinking of more creativity, thanks

 

[Woopie]

Some stones, spiderwebs, all about the detail

 

[Sharp]

I dont like it to be honest, but you could add a bit more detail like gravel and poison.

 

[Sir Shutter]

Didn't like to add more, will be "over-detailed"

hmm well, I'll try adding and tell me what you think..

@Woopie:-

Hmm, more stones, webs? xD.. I'll try

 

[Sir Shutter]

I've updated the map, check it now, I added another creativity xD!

 

[Sharp]

looks alot better than your first except for a couple of bugs.

The first one: Next to the stairs, if you rope up the hole, you will go up 2 floor because of landing on the main part of the stairs.

 

[Sir Shutter]

I dont really mind the stair's coz I wont use it, anyway il be fixing ^^

thanks

 

[Exxivi]

stones on stones ? :/

 

[Sir Shutter]

never saw stones on stones on ur life?

 

[TILFen]

the rpg feeling is missing

 

[Sir Shutter]

the rpg feeling is missing

rpg feeling aint missing xD it's just a giant spider spot,

well im gonna post a cyc mountain

 

[Sir Shutter]

The cyclops mountain!

Tell me what you guys think of it, and what need's to be improved!

 

[Woopie]

To squary, randomized detailing all over the place. No thinking before doin' and such

 

[Sir Shutter]

squary? thats not squary and its not randomizing :/

dont just tell me what's bad in it, but tell me what's wrong in it that needs to be fixed

 

[TILFen]

still no rpg

 

[moderhuis]

still no rpg

could u please shut up with that, who says he wants to make it rpg feeling

 

[Zonet]

I didn't like it.

1. When taking picture do not zoom out to much.
2. When taking picture, click S and Q.
3. Putting swamp stones with cyc?

 

[Neon]

I didn't like it.

1. When taking picture do not zoom out to much.
2. When taking picture, click S and Q.
3. Putting swamp stones with cyc?

It's mossy stones. Why can't they be there?