It's indeed good that he takes critism well, he might have more potential than I actually thought. I'll be spectating you, supershady

. It's also good to see that he really wants to get a good mapper, I said 'I don't see any potential in you' on purpose, yes indeed to make him feel sick. You got the right direction, supershady.
I agree with the suggestion given by Archez, however the 'avoid every squareness'. Sometimes it's right to map with squares, but it's really hard to explain.. I guess you have to find out yourself, by mapping, mapping, mapping and mapping..
You might want to try to copy others work as well, on that way you learn a lot actually. Then later you should try to copy from everywhere a little bit and in the very end you should develop your very own style. If it all goes smooth, you should be a good mapper by then, but remember you won't achieve this within a few days or weeks. For some it takes longer, for others it doesn't take that long. If I were you, I'd reckon that you say yourself that your not good enough, then you'll always get better. Everyone is able to improve, even God would.
I hope those words help you a little on your road to the top

, now why are you looking into this thread over again? Go and map :thumbup:!
Good luck, you'll see my around..