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[Daeron]

Hi,

I am new to spriting but I hope I will improve more, and become better. And of course I want some feedback too! Also be constructive at comment, I'll start with few sprites...

Grass

Mushroom

Sincerely,
Daeron

 

[Daeron]

Hello started to sprite again

[Does it look like a hammer]

Improved wall?

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Comment! Give me some nice advice!
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[Wason]

Keep Work and u'll be much good

 

[Leshrot]

In the Wall: my suggest is "don't put lines in the corners", if you shade the side that would be more realistic, you can see the sides by the contrast.

In the sword, i suggest you study Anti-aliasing to apply in the blade.
The ornaments must be thin, but sufficient sized to AA the surface.


About the armor, do it more big, near 32x32 or in this size.

 

[Wason]

well his first job let him do what he want :/ he will learn more soon.

 

[Leshrot]

"Comment! Give me some nice advice!"

As he said this, I think he wants to improve his skills, and that's great, If all artists get his mentality, everyone would have a huge technical level.. When he realizes different ways to accomplish the sprite and improve it, he will surpass himself and get better.

 

[Wason]

"Comment! Give me some nice advice!"

As he said this, I think he wants to improve his skills, and that's great, If all artists get his mentality, everyone would have a huge technical level.. When he realizes different ways to accomplish the sprite and improve it, he will surpass himself and get better.

ofc he will be great soon but we should Encourage him so he can learn if we like that

 

[Leshrot]

ofc he will be great soon but we should Encourage him so he can learn if we like that

Which part I discouraged him? I bet on him showing alternatives ^^

 

[Wason]

Which part I discouraged him? I bet on him showing alternatives ^^

try to say something good

 

[Leshrot]

I can tell thousands of beautiful things like "ohh, amazing", "awesome ohh" "ohh I love birds." I would be more one number, post, or whatever.
I wouldn't be significant in his development.

After a while, people with that "good" feedback get used to it and other comment would be "rude" or not good accepted.

He is a mature enough person about to realize that criticism/suggest aren't stones thrown against you. Are stones that show you the way/one of the ways!
He asked that!!

 

[Wason]

More Then More he Gona Learn Omg im lazy to answer those posts
i gona sleep then bye.

 

[Daeron]

Keep Work and u'll be much good

Thank you ! I'll will practice everyday

In the Wall: my suggest is "don't put lines in the corners", if you shade the side that would be more realistic, you can see the sides by the contrast.

In the sword, i suggest you study Anti-aliasing to apply in the blade.
The ornaments must be thin, but sufficient sized to AA the surface.


About the armor, do it more big, near 32x32 or in this size.

The wall part, I didn't understand it quite well, what do you mean with "don't put lines in the corners"? I'd like to know
And one more thing...what is AA? I am sorry if I am being newbie right now, but I wanna learn!
Thank you for your advice !

Edit/Update

 

[Leshrot]

I did that simple tutorial.
http://otland.net/threads/aa-the-technique-behind-the-pixels.207235/

The most interesting is you open photos and start analyzing the composition of pixels. There are several layers of colors composing Anti-Aliasing, especially in borders between people and background, objects and background, etc..

 

[MasterGrand]

Well done and keep up !!!

 

[Daeron]

Hi, I was inactive a little while but I am back active to sprite for sure. I am still trying to train on shading/colors the color part is very hard for me with different colors.
Back again with a sword, I don't think it looks good but yeah...

And aswell comment and give me some nice advice I need to know!
Thanks!

 

[dami1310]

Contrast is very important in sword sprites, fix it.
You should also work with lineart, handle is too thin and edge is just simple as fuck.

 

[Daeron]

Contrast is very important in sword sprites, fix it.
You should also work with lineart, handle is too thin and edge is just simple as fuck.

Can you explain what you mean with contrast and line art? Contrast is the shading part right? And I know the handle is thin, I maybe try to edit it later, and the edge is simple because it's easier and I want to learn easily, maybe I will try a different weapon.

 

[dami1310]

Contrast is the difference in color and light between parts of an image.
Some colors aren't contrasting well, look:

Your sword need high contrast.

 

[Daeron]

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@dami1310
Better?

 

[dami1310]

I was editing it and...